ciararavenblaze's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Reaserching Movement 2]

smart stuff.

the song that was playing during the flash was catchy. (what was it?) but I'm not rating you on that (even tho I did give you a 9 for sound).

I like that you're using flash for something other than stick figure "kill fests" like a lot of people do, and that you're submitting flash on here for actual feedback in hopes of improving what you do.

anyway, overall, this is a good flash. not for storylines or for violence or for "OMGWTFBBQ ANIMATION SKILLZ!!1!1111!!!", but because you're putting Flash to something very useful unlike about half of the people who submit their work to NG. I like the learning technique you're using. I think a lot of people (myself included) should try this instead of giving up and resorting to stick figures.

this is great work so keep it up. I looked at your earlier one and I can see a big improvement between that one and this one already.

Basking-Shark responds:

thanks the song is My Parents Love ME- Keiser chiefs

[Kids should be outside.]

stunning.

I adore this flash. there's not very much to it length-wise, but you got the message across very well. the graphics were pretty and creative, and I personally think you used the perfect song for this flash as well.

[Creation by Turtle]

very creative.

watching that.. watching the turtle create everything reminded me of something I learned way back in 4th grade when my teachers were teaching me and my fellow classmates about Native Americans and what they did and what they believed..

and that reminded me of one tribe's belief of how the world was created.. (a turtle brought up dirt from underwater and placed it on its back until all the land was formed, etc) I REALLY, really enjoyed that.

and the graphics are nice, too.

about the only thing I didn't really like was that you didn't have a preloader "press here to play when loaded" button.

the rest of it though.. VERY well done.

[Bones]

yikes.

okay, that was pretty fucked up, dude.. took me a second to laugh there.. heh heh.. that was just so fucked up.

that said, I gotta say your graphics are top notch. VERY GOOD. I'm very impressed with your skills. very well done.

I just didn't expect that ending.. damn.

[Do Us Part]

beautiful work.

I actually guessed that her husband was dead before I read what you said about that fact. VERY beautiful work. the artwork is especially impressive. I adore the theme too. GREAT job.

[8-bit Theater 4]

well done.

I love this comic series, and I LOVE these flash series.

my only complaint is the lack of subtitles in #3. However, in #4, the option to have subtitles on or off is a *great* addition.

I do hope you plan to make more in the future, these are too good.

[In The Sand]

very sweet!

I thought this was a very lovely and very sweet flash. it definitely satisfies the hopeless romantic in me. great work. :)