ciararavenblaze's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

["Strange Fruit"]

hmm...

okay, I'm sorry, but if people don't like this, or even connect to this in some way, then they're either missing the point, or they have hearts of stone.

no, you didn't make me cry, and no you didn't particularly move me in any emotional way, but that's not because you failed (since, you know, you DIDN'T fail), but rather because I've already been, through friends and loved ones, dealing with the very subject of racism. as a result, this was just an affirmation of what I've had to watch the people that I love deal with.

from the bottom of my heart, thank you for this flash movie. seriously--THANK YOU. I will DEFINITELY be showing this to my friends.

J-qb responds:

you, my dear lady, are welcome

[what a blam is like]

not bad...

was the low quality of this flash intentional?
this wasn't good, nor was it bad. you certainly got your point across.

you said you weren't asking for a five, and it certainly didn't (overall) deserve a five, but you certainly deserve NOT to be blammed as well.

I have to say you did an all right job on this. :)

straberrykiler6789 responds:

thanks

[Reaserching Movement 2]

smart stuff.

the song that was playing during the flash was catchy. (what was it?) but I'm not rating you on that (even tho I did give you a 9 for sound).

I like that you're using flash for something other than stick figure "kill fests" like a lot of people do, and that you're submitting flash on here for actual feedback in hopes of improving what you do.

anyway, overall, this is a good flash. not for storylines or for violence or for "OMGWTFBBQ ANIMATION SKILLZ!!1!1111!!!", but because you're putting Flash to something very useful unlike about half of the people who submit their work to NG. I like the learning technique you're using. I think a lot of people (myself included) should try this instead of giving up and resorting to stick figures.

this is great work so keep it up. I looked at your earlier one and I can see a big improvement between that one and this one already.

Basking-Shark responds:

thanks the song is My Parents Love ME- Keiser chiefs

[Wild Child]

very good start

this is only your FIRST flash? I'd be guessing more like third or fourth. your drawing isn't perfect, but it's damn good enough that I was pretty impressed with the movie overall.

keep it up, you'll only get better from here, and this was pretty good to start with.

TheAbominableMatt responds:

thank you very much for the encouragement and the overall good review